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 In the 5th semester of their undergrad studies, BSc students from Budapest
 University of Technology and Economics embark on their first journey of
 scientific research. I was always interested in and fascinated by computer 
-graphics, it came naturally to choose a subject in this area. As I had little
+graphics, so it came naturally to choose a subject in this area. As I had little
  hands-on experience in this field, a long time had to be dedicated
 to research and trying out different simulation methods.
 
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 \subsection{Mass Spring System}
 The whole idea of doing hair simulation as my project laboratory came after
-reading \citet{PixarPaper}. They outline a method for the artistic simulation of
-curly hair for use in their film production. The method was featured in the 2012
-movie Brave.
+reading the paper by \citet{PixarPaper}.  They outline a method for the artistic
+simulation of curly hair for use in their film production. The method was
+featured in the 2012 movie Brave.
 
 This approach models the hair as a chain of particles with given mass, each
 connected via springs. This results in a mass-spring system, which is then